My Favourite Person Essay

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Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
My favorite person is my father who always cares forme. Without my father’s inspiration I wouldnever be able tohandle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results,hesaid,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faithin yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard work. On thewhole, he is a great inspiration for me.
' I was very depressed about my upcoming results., He he said,”'
after the word 'results' i couldn't get the punctuation marks. is it comma or semicolon ?
'I would never be able to handle difficult situations.'
If I use could instead of would, will it be wrong in the above sentence ?

thanks in advance
Hi sorry, it should read:

For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”

I added 'so' in this response.
Regarding could/would, I am sure there is a rule regarding when to use could and would, but to me as a native English speaker, 'could' sounds wrong.
yea 'would' is more appropriate
In the name of ALLAH my favorite personality is MUHAMMAD S.A.W.W...
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one God we should obey of ALLAH
Absolutely he is also my best personality.

         Do you have that person in your life that makes you smile? That one lucky guy is my dad. I love him so much. He helps me with my homework. He loves to sing with me, and loves to cook with me. I love him and couldn’t imagine my life without him.

 

My dad is a teacher. He is very good at math, English, especially writing. Whenever I’m struggling with anything I can always go to him. Math isn’t my brightest subject. Don’t get me wrong, I love it but sometimes I need help. My father of all trades is always there to help.

 

Dads are usually like their sons right? Well my dad and I are very similar. We both love to sing. My favorite part about long car trips, is plugging in the phone and singing along to songs. We both share a love of music. Our dream is to play the guitar by the fire while singing familiar songs.

 

Cooking is a loved thing in my family. Everyone loves to eat. You can’t have food without chefs. That’s where my dad comes in. He’s the breakfast king. Anything you want he can make it! One of my favorites is homemade doughnuts and foil dinners,(or hobo dinners.) These are some of our family’s favorites. The best part is preparing together and bonding as a family.

 

From cooking, to singing, to helping me with my homework, my favorite person is definitely my dad!

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